Hi Jake, thanks again for sending your draft. Haven’t done this in awhile and always enjoy this kind of creative discussion:)
Subtitle: I think it could tie in with her choice …

During our back and forth, these words just popped out:
The relief after the storm
/ Her relief after the storm ….
or
An empty decade comes to an end


Makes us curious ☺️

Up to you ~ giving a clue is always good :)